tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4025264318423694875.post8588027843953387527..comments2024-02-05T10:41:31.777-05:00Comments on I Saw Lightning Fall: Fragment No. 10Loren Eatonhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/12488412683340389286noreply@blogger.comBlogger8125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4025264318423694875.post-52991410249960486022010-09-08T08:59:54.898-04:002010-09-08T08:59:54.898-04:00He had a face, I'm sure of it. But as to its a...He had a face, I'm sure of it. But as to its appearance, whether it was hatchet-thin or round as a balloon, a generous mouth or one looking as though it'd been cut by a knife -- well, that's why I'm here. With you. I know you've seen him. And I know you've seen this here hammer. So why don't we spare ourselves the unpleasantries and start talking? I've got all night, after all.Loren Eatonhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/12488412683340389286noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4025264318423694875.post-76786891400434149642010-09-07T23:12:24.543-04:002010-09-07T23:12:24.543-04:00He had a face. The past tense was appropriate.He had a face. The past tense was appropriate.Scattercathttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00302815654553659644noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4025264318423694875.post-59092938783979938112010-09-07T14:52:06.392-04:002010-09-07T14:52:06.392-04:00Yea verily, verily. Everybody loves a Dagon allusi...Yea verily, verily. Everybody loves a <a href="http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Dagon_%28short_story%29" rel="nofollow">Dagon</a> allusion.B. Nagelhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07620736939701035617noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4025264318423694875.post-26863513169752080332010-09-07T13:08:59.129-04:002010-09-07T13:08:59.129-04:00The squamous terror from beyond the stars had a fa...The squamous terror from beyond the stars had a face of such horrifying, eldritch geometry that merely gripping my pen in an attempt to scribe a description on paper drove me to the brink of madness. Those <i>nostrils</i>. The window, the window!Loren Eatonhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/12488412683340389286noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4025264318423694875.post-29013614558602868932010-09-07T10:09:20.715-04:002010-09-07T10:09:20.715-04:00The front of his head suggested a face, yet there ...The front of his head suggested a face, yet there was none under his hat, only a slick of shadow tinged with menace. A drop of sweat down your spine. A prickling in your joints.B. Nagelhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07620736939701035617noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4025264318423694875.post-2477788675243929252010-09-07T09:02:32.525-04:002010-09-07T09:02:32.525-04:00He had a face puckered like a damp bun, wrinkled w...He had a face puckered like a damp bun, wrinkled with confusion as he stared at the comments on his blog, uncertain how to reply.Loren Eatonhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/12488412683340389286noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4025264318423694875.post-63045415924265225512010-09-07T01:34:00.063-04:002010-09-07T01:34:00.063-04:00It had a face well suited for dark hyperbole, brow...It had a face well suited for dark hyperbole, brows low and brooding, lips pulled back to the perpetual snarl of something that preyed on old slices of roast beef.Ben Mannhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03237990156034508963noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4025264318423694875.post-47186150974628686852010-09-06T23:23:41.019-04:002010-09-06T23:23:41.019-04:00She had a face that was all points and angles, a p...She had a face that was all points and angles, a predatory beak of a nose and keen eyes that missed nothing, especially not prey.Scattercathttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00302815654553659644noreply@blogger.com