tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4025264318423694875.post1347790867389965449..comments2024-02-05T10:41:31.777-05:00Comments on I Saw Lightning Fall: Phraselet No. 110Loren Eatonhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/12488412683340389286noreply@blogger.comBlogger2125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4025264318423694875.post-54534792699635845112010-08-11T17:57:04.405-04:002010-08-11T17:57:04.405-04:00I would've liked "colors" better, to...I would've liked "colors" better, too. Alas, I think Gresham is beyond any ability to edit now.Loren Eatonhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/12488412683340389286noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4025264318423694875.post-11421868351936626232010-08-10T15:48:26.991-04:002010-08-10T15:48:26.991-04:00I love the metaphor, but I don't know if "...I love the metaphor, but I don't know if "particles" is quite the right word. "Colors" or "components," maybe?Scattercathttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00302815654553659644noreply@blogger.com